Hi Danne, I really enjoyed how you explained a lot about what the author wants us to know. I think you could add more information about why we read this text. Other than that, I think you did a really great job!
Oush Danne, I liked reading your text it was good. I liked the descriptive words you used. I think you there was a few important things you left out but it's still good. Yoza
Hi Danne, I really enjoyed how you explained a lot about what the author wants us to know. I think you could add more information about why we read this text. Other than that, I think you did a really great job!
ReplyDeleteOush Danne, I liked reading your text it was good. I liked the descriptive words you used. I think you there was a few important things you left out but it's still good. Yoza
ReplyDeleteGood work Danne, and I also like the feedback Johnny and Kyle gave you, too.
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